I'm really, really glad you acknowledged why Veronica would want to do this, and you made Logan sensitive to her needs but also her and you didn't gloss over her past. A lot of fics with any kind of Veronica Mars kink seem to go straight to the smut without any thought to anything else. I never thought Veronica ever gave any indication that she would like giving up control (quite the opposite, actually) and I never thought Logan gave any indication that he wasn't thoughtful about her when it came to sex, so this was really good to read because you tackled that. With Veronica's rape(s) and Logan's child-abuse, I can't read most kink because it seems blatantly out of character, but you put thought into this and made it work FOR their relationship. Nice job.
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Date: 2009-06-29 02:07 am (UTC)