She cries out wordlessly and begins to hump his hand unabashedly. He lowers his head and buries his nose in her pubic hair, breathing in the scent of her excitement. He slides his tongue against her clit and and begins a slow circular pattern of licks, while at the same time tapping the bullet inside her in a steady rhythm.
"Oh fuck yes, oh god yes," she cries as the headboard shakes from the intensity of her orgasm, her arms flailing against the restraints.
Logan pulls the bullet from inside her as he continues to lap slowly at her clit. When she is breathing hard but no longer quivering, he turns the bullet to it's highest setting and lays it gently against her pubic bone again.
"No," Veronica whispers. "No, no more, it's too much, I'm too sensitive...it's too much."
"I want to make you come one more time, Veronica," Logan says quietly, gliding the bullet down and stopping it against her swollen clit. She cries out again and pulls away.
Oh wow. This is so perfectly written and fantastically hot. one thing I really admire about how you write smut is you do detail so well...I feel like I always rush through the detail points, and miss out on all the convo and sexy details that we get when people read your stuff.
Anyway, this entire fic was lovely and sexy. I really love this verse you've created. I wonder if you'll find any more inspiration to write in this verse -- since you've brought them back together so perfectly.
Oh, ETA: Love that he passed out at the end. :)
Not that I'm not excited for more Post Partum too...man, I'm excited for whatever you write. :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS.
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Date: 2009-06-28 12:12 am (UTC)Anyway, my last most favorite part:
She cries out wordlessly and begins to hump his hand unabashedly. He lowers his head and buries his nose in her pubic hair, breathing in the scent of her excitement. He slides his tongue against her clit and and begins a slow circular pattern of licks, while at the same time tapping the bullet inside her in a steady rhythm.
"Oh fuck yes, oh god yes," she cries as the headboard shakes from the intensity of her orgasm, her arms flailing against the restraints.
Logan pulls the bullet from inside her as he continues to lap slowly at her clit. When she is breathing hard but no longer quivering, he turns the bullet to it's highest setting and lays it gently against her pubic bone again.
"No," Veronica whispers. "No, no more, it's too much, I'm too sensitive...it's too much."
"I want to make you come one more time, Veronica," Logan says quietly, gliding the bullet down and stopping it against her swollen clit. She cries out again and pulls away.
Oh wow. This is so perfectly written and fantastically hot. one thing I really admire about how you write smut is you do detail so well...I feel like I always rush through the detail points, and miss out on all the convo and sexy details that we get when people read your stuff.
Anyway, this entire fic was lovely and sexy. I really love this verse you've created. I wonder if you'll find any more inspiration to write in this verse -- since you've brought them back together so perfectly.
Oh, ETA: Love that he passed out at the end. :)
Not that I'm not excited for more Post Partum too...man, I'm excited for whatever you write. :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS.